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Par ptitelouve : le 05/03/14 à 15:09:05

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Bonjour,

j'aurais besoin de quelqu'un de bon en anglais pour me corriger mes fautes...

Un(e) volontaire ?

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Par kefiretlome : le 05/03/14 à 12:28:44

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Par Nel.geneve : le 05/03/14 à 12:46:36

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Ca dépend sur quoi, mais envoie toujours...

Par ptitelouve : le 05/03/14 à 14:27:06

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 Je dois partir faire un stage au Canada fin mai...j'ai donc contacté un ranch, qui m'a demandé de leur répondre en 200 mots... voici ma réponse

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I've find your website on Google, I've written "ranch Ontario" because I would like to do my internship in a ranch with horses and cattle or in a breeding of ranch horses or in a school of western riding.
So, I find the Rawhide Adventures and I'm really interested because you have ranch horses and beef cows too. It's an occasion for me to discover the Angus breed, a breed very rare in France.
In your ranch, I can meet people thanks to the summer camp, the trail rides, so I can improve my english skills.
My intersnhip allows me to discover the specificites of the canadian agriculture, I think they're not the same in France !
If I choose the Rawhide Adventures it's because I have a great passion for the western riding, ranches,... And I would like to learn more about the ranch horse : the education for example, the bases of the work of ranch, the cattle drive and particularities of the Angus cow.


Par ClementineAD : le 05/03/14 à 14:42:39

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 Je suis pas une pro, mais j'essaye
I've found your website on Google, I've written "ranch Ontario" because I would like to do my internship in a ranch with horses and cattle, in a horses' breeding ranch or in a school of western riding.
So, I've found the Rawhide Adventures and I'm really interested because you have a ranch with horses and beef cows too. It's an occasion for me to discover the Angus breed, a very rare breed in France.
In your ranch, I could meet people thanks to the summer camp, the trail rides, so I coud improve my knowledges of english language.
My intersnhip would allows me to discover the specificites of the canadian agriculture, I think french agriculture is quite different!
If I've chosen the Rawhide Adventures it's because I have a great passion for the western riding, ranches,... And I would like to learn more about the horse ranch: the education for example, the bases of the work in a ranch, the cattle drive and particularities of the Angus cow."


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Par ptitelouve : le 05/03/14 à 14:47:14

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 ça me semble mieux déjà ! merci !

Par Nel.geneve : le 05/03/14 à 15:01:57

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I found your website on Google, I typed in "ranch Ontario" because I wanted to do my internship in a ranch with horses and cattle, a horse breeding ranch or in a western riding school.
So, I found the Rawhide Adventures and I'm really interested because you have horses and beef cattle too. It's an occasion for me to discover the Angus breed, which is really uncommon in France.
At your ranch, I could meet people thanks to the summer camps and trail rides, so I can improve my english.
My intersnhip would allows me to discover the particulars of canadian agriculture, I think they're not the same in France !
I chose the Rawhide Adventures because I have a great passion for the western riding, ranches... And I would like to learn more about the ranch horse : the education for example, the basics of ranch work, cattle driving and particularities of the Angus cow.


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Par ptitelouve : le 05/03/14 à 15:06:30

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 Merci beaucoup !

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